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A Birthday Tickle

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It was the 6th of October, aka Moggy’s Birthday. Right now though, only he and Mooglemaggie were sitting together waiting for the others to arrive. They both talked with each other about a big variety of different subjects, though surprisingly, they talked a lot about Mooglemage since that was someone they both had in common.
Anyways, during the fifth time they talked about him, Moggy suddenly said:

-“Hey, did you know that Mooglemage is ticklish?”
-“He is?” Maggie said and pointed her ears towards him. “How do you know that?”
-“Well, I did tickle him once, and he laughed like crazy.” Moggy said and couldn’t help but giggle a little for himself. Maggie did smile as well.
-“That sounds like fun. Wished I was there, hehe.”
Moggy sat down and though back to that event and a new question started to grow inside him. After a while he had to ask.
-“Say Maggie, are you ticklish?” he asked. Maggie looked back and blushed a little.
-“To be honest…” she started. “I don’t know. I don’t think I even know how it feels.” Then Maggie shined up and asked Moggy. “Maybe you can tickle me and then we’ll both find out!”
Moggy honestly got a little taken off guard by the sudden request, and he also knew that once he starts, he sometimes have a hard time quitting. However, he accepted to give it a try.
Besides, he couldn’t say ‘no’ to that cute and innocent smile on Maggie’s face.

Moggy walked over and sat down next to her.
-“Okay, just raise your arm and close your eyes.” Moggy said and Maggie quickly did what he said, quite eager to see where this would lead.
Maggie was still wearing her traditional light blue dress so Moggy knew it would be gentle for her. Maggie was still waiting for something to happen when she suddenly felt something pressing into her armpit. She didn’t know why but it made her giggle and a quick impulse told her to lower her arm and cover up her armpit at once.
-“Aeeeiihiihiihi!” she giggled out while pressing her arm against her side, right before Moggy managed to pull his hand away. “W-What was that?”
-“A tickle.” Moggy said with a smile. “Did you like it?”
Maggie though for a moment and said:
-“Hehe, it was quite fun actually. Can you do it again?” she asked and exposed her armpit once more. Moggy couldn’t say no so he approached it with his fingers again. However, this time he wanted to tease her a little. Just a few inches away he quickly changed aim and started to rub Maggie’s neck instead, and since her dress didn’t cover her neck, her reaction would technically be bigger this time.
-“Iiiiihihihihahah!” Maggie squeaked out as she pressed her shoulder against her head, only to lock Moggy’s fingers at her neck giving him some more time to play around with. “Ahhah, stohohop ihihitt Mohoggyy!” Maggie almost shouted out and grabbed Moggy’s arm and pulled it away from her neck.
-“Sorry about that Maggie.” Moggy said while Maggie was trying to calm down from the surprise. “But a tickle is better if it’s unexpected. That’s something I learned from earlier experience.”

Mooglemaggie finally got her breath back, but despite the tickle she was still smiling and must have though it was funny.
-“It was a little shocking, but I kind of liked it as well.” Maggie said and giggled a little. “Is there anything more you can show me?”
Moggy though for himself and said.
-“Well, if you want to tickle someone a little more intensive, there is a technique I can show you.” Moggy said as he went over and sat down in front of Maggie. “But I’ll need to borrow your right leg.”
-“My leg! Why?” Maggie asked a little curious, and there was also a small hint of panic in there.
-“You’ll see.” Moggy said with a smirk as he turned around, sitting with his back at Maggie and grabbed her right leg. He raised her leg and held it under his left arm and then wrapped his arm around her leg and pressed his arm against his stomach, thereby locking Maggie’s leg in a tight position. Since Moggy was sitting with his back towards Maggie, she couldn’t see what he was doing, but she didn’t had to wait for long because suddenly she could feel something rub the sole of her foot. She quickly realised that the feet must be ticklish as well because she couldn’t hold in the laughs that wanted to escape through her mouth.
-“Ahaahaahaahahahahaha!” Maggie laughed out and squirmed around.
-“So tell me Maggie, do you like this?” Moggy said as he started to slide the fingers of his free hand up and down over Maggie’s foot sole in quite a fast pace.
-“Nohohohohohohoho!!!” Maggie screamed out as she held her arms over her chest trying to cease the pain from the laughs.
-“Well, why don’t you just pull back your leg if you doesn’t like it?” Moggy said as he wiggled his fingers between Maggie’s toes.
Maggie tried to pull her leg back but quickly realised it was as good as impossible thanks to the firm grip Moggy had on it. She tried to pull it back over and over again but it was of no use. And during all of her attempts, she laughed harder and heavier for each passing second, and she were on the edge of exhaustion.

But suddenly, Moggy stopped tickling her foot. Maggie grasped her breath again and asked him why he stopped.
-“I promised you to only show this technique, and I didn’t wanted you to pass out.” Moggy said as he let go of Maggie’s leg. She quickly sat up and rubbed her foot, trying to get back the blood flow in it. “Anyways, did you enjoy it?” Moggy asked as he turned around once again so that he could see Maggie.
-“Well, I don’t know!” Maggie said as she blushed again. “But it made me happy and it made me laugh!” she said and started to giggle again, together with a small blush.
Moggy got happy realising that Maggie actually did enjoy it. The truth is that Moggy got carried away a little too much with the last tickle than what he intended. Luckily, Maggie didn’t realise this.
-“However…” Maggie said and Moggy suddenly got a bad feeling. “I really want to try the other way to.” she said and Moggy clearly saw that Maggie looked straight at his feet when she said that, and this made Moggy a little worried since he knew that he himself was very ticklish as well.
-“You… want to tickle me?” Moggy asked (as he somehow managed to hide the nervous in his voice) even if he already knew the answer. Maggie nodded and made a quick poke on Moggy’s right foot. Moggy didn’t want to but he also wanted to give Maggie a chance to try it out. And on top of it all, Maggie had that smile on her face again that he couldn’t say ‘no’ to.

This time it was Maggie’s turn to stand up and sit down on Moggy’s right side so she could get better access. She decided to try out the method that Moggy used on her since it was the only one she knew at time. When she finally had Moggy’s right foot in a comfortable hold she looked over to Moggy.
-“You ready?” Maggie asked and actually tried to sound a little mischievous while doing so.
-“… Sure!” Moggy answered a little nervous.

However, it turned out far different that Moggy did image. The fact that this was Maggie’s first time trying to tickle someone was clearly shown. It did make Moggy giggle a little, but it didn’t make him squirm.
-“So, what do you say now, huh!” Maggie tried to say with a hint of a taunt while doing her best rubbing Moggy’s sole with her fingers. Moggy couldn’t help but think that she was cute while trying to be mischievous and he didn’t want to ruin her fun so he decided to fake his reaction.
-“Hahaha, it tihickles!” Moggy giggled out and acted some squirming with his free arms. Luckily, Maggie bought it all and smiled while rubbing some more. “Hahhahehehehihihi!” Moggy added quickly after.
-“Ahh, lets speed it up, shall we?” Maggie said and speeded up the moment a little. It did tickle a little more so Moggy didn’t have to fake it so much as he did.
-“AAaahhaahhaahh! Pleheheaseheheh, stoohohoopp!” Moggy laughed out, though still with a hint of acting in it.
It made Maggie smile again and she giggled for herself. Though then she stopped with her fingers
-“Are you quitting already?” Moggy asked her as she was sitting still. The thing was that Maggie wasn’t satisfied with the result and she wondered if she somehow could increase the tickling a little more.
-“Moggy, do you mind if I tries something different?” Maggie asked with a curious tone.
-“Sure Maggie.” Moggy said with a feeling that he would be able to handle it. “Finding your own personal style is quite…”

Moggy never got a chance to finish his sentence because suddenly something else was tickling his foot, and this time it was much more intense than Maggie’s fingers.
-“HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!” Moggy laughed out pretty loud (no act this time) as he felt something warm slide down the sole. He tried to get a close look on what Maggie was doing and saw her bending over.
-“Hehe, did you like that Moggy?!” Maggie asked as she rose up her body and looked at Moggy. Moggy saw that her tongue was hanging out from her mouth and he understood that she did the tickling by licking his foot.
-“M-Maggie, pp-please!” Moggy said while grabbing his breath. “Please don’t do that again.”
Maggie looked at him and though that maybe it was going a little too far. But at the same time she had a voice inside her head that told her that she wasn’t done yet.
-“Sorry, but I’m not really done yet!” Maggie said, once again with a smile, and bend over again. A little later Moggy could feel a new warm stroke against his sole.
-“AHHHHAHAHAHHHAHA! NOOHOOHOOHOHOOHO! MAHAHAKE IHIT STOHOHOP PLEHEASEHEHE!!!” Moggy screamed out as tears now was starting to run down his face. He tried to pull his leg away from Maggie but thanks to her grip around it, that he himself ironically did teach her, his leg wasn’t going anywhere. All he could do was to curl together and hoping it would end soon. Maggie however was enjoying herself way to much too even notice Moggy’s hysterical laughs so she prepared for the third attack.

This time she wanted to play a little, so when the tongue hit the bottom of the sole she moved it up against the sole and then down again (in a N pattern), thereby making the lick trice as long as before. Thanks to the previous two strokes the sole was pretty wet thereby making it easy for it to move.
-“AAHHHAAAAHHHHAAAAHHHHEEEEHHHHEEEHHEHHHHEEEEHHHEE!”
At this moment Moggy had stop trying to pull his leg away, because he knew it wouldn’t work and because of exhaustion. His face had also blushed up like the sun by the fatigue. All he could do was to lie down and letting the laughs break out of him together with his tears until he would pass out.
However, Maggie stopped at this point and looked over at Moggy and saw that he was crying. She quickly released his leg and lay down next to him. She allowed Moggy to breathe a moment before she talked
-“Even if you laughed more than I did I want you to know that I had a great time overall. Thanks Moggy.” She said and gave him a kiss on his cheek. Moggy blushed again, this time for a different reason. “And by the way, Happy Birthday!”

A few minutes later they both were up on their feet again and Mooglemage entered the room, holding a package in his arms. Probably a gift for Moggy.
-“Hi there!” Maggie said and walked up towards him after that he gave the present to Moggy. Maggie remembered what Moggy had told her about Mooglemage being ticklish. “You know what, Moggy has taught me something new today. You want to see what it is?”
Mooglemage did see a warning signal when he heard it was Moggy that had taught her something new, but he felt that he could trust Maggie. Besides, he just couldn’t say ‘no’ to that cute and innocent smile on Maggie’s face.
READ Disclaimer

I have to point out one thing straight away. Alot of people around here sees tickling as something sexual, and I want to point out that NO sexual appeal is intended in this story, it's all just a play between two friends. I want you all to know this!


Anyways,

Here's an idea I got in the middle of last week, maybe inspired by that pic I made with Mooglemaggie and Moggy together. And I also quickly found out that Moggy's Birthday actually is today. Normaly I doesn't care so much about OC Birthdays but since I already had an idea I could combine it together.

I have actually wanted to write a tickle story for a long time and I'm glad with the results. I think it could have been done better but it's my first try. I might make another one sometime if I feels for it :nod: I hope you enjoys :)

And never looks directly at Mooglemaggie when she's smiling. Her charm will bind you around her finger ^^;

Characters and Story (C) Me

And, I guess, Happy Birthday to Moggy :cake:
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Awesome are you doing requests